Walter & John Pantech
Nov 1, 2008 21:03:32 GMT -5
Post by Skylos on Nov 1, 2008 21:03:32 GMT -5
[First is mine, second is Mike's. The following passage has been edited a bit.]
[4/02/07] [Pg. 182] [Starting at post #9077]
Caleb picked up the light one by his shirt collar and slipped his hood off. "Huh...?" Caleb's eyes dilated.
"What is it Caleb?"
Caleb looked at the face in front of him. "It's...My dad...But I thought he didn't have powers...and he wouldn't just attack me..."
"Your father? We've better take him back to the factory...."
Caleb blinked. "Who...who are you holding Neon?" Caleb nodded. "Yes...you're right...you knocked him out."
Neon took the hood off and his eyes widened as he backed up. "No...Please no..."
Caleb looked at Neon. "Ne...on? Who...is it?" Caleb put his dad over his shoulder and dragged him over to Neon.
"My...My...Father..."
Caleb blinked. "But I thought...you killed him..."
"But I thought I did...I killed him...He died right infront me..." Neon closed his eyes trying to calm down.
[4/02/07] [Pg. 182] [Starting at post #9077]
Caleb picked up the light one by his shirt collar and slipped his hood off. "Huh...?" Caleb's eyes dilated.
"What is it Caleb?"
Caleb looked at the face in front of him. "It's...My dad...But I thought he didn't have powers...and he wouldn't just attack me..."
"Your father? We've better take him back to the factory...."
Caleb blinked. "Who...who are you holding Neon?" Caleb nodded. "Yes...you're right...you knocked him out."
Neon took the hood off and his eyes widened as he backed up. "No...Please no..."
Caleb looked at Neon. "Ne...on? Who...is it?" Caleb put his dad over his shoulder and dragged him over to Neon.
"My...My...Father..."
Caleb blinked. "But I thought...you killed him..."
"But I thought I did...I killed him...He died right infront me..." Neon closed his eyes trying to calm down.